Ferry Building by phase2
Fri, 2004-12-10 22:24
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Ferry Building by phase2
Well, I love this fine writing; I can picture this ferry terminal - Oban? Mallaig? Kyle? - and its architecture and gulls and smell the sea air. I notice the piece has not yet been cherry-picked - is it perhaps that the descriptiveness lends itself more to prose than poetry? (Humble suggestion, feel free to disagree).
archergirl
"a cardiograph of the waves
on each side flicking freckles of brighter light
into the luminous echoey space"...this is great imagery. Really nice writing.
fay
oh, THANKYOU :0)