Alone together

Hi Colourblind,
glad you liked the poem 'MOMENT ON A BALCONY'. Thanks for letting me know.
I read your poem 'ALONE TOGETHER' It has a good rhythm, I think you could push that aspect! I liked it! It sounds natural -- the language I mean.
I'll visit your collection again soon
In spirit
Chris Whitley
P.S. It feels vulnerable. Take care!