On Chester Way by Ralph

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Fri, 2006-03-24 17:00

I really liked this despite being unfamiliar with some of the proper nouns. Even so I love the West End setting.

I think I might prefer the poem without the last line as the penultimate line ties it all up neatly ...but its really potent as it is.

Nice one.

Fri, 2006-03-24 18:38

this has a lovely rhythm - but i have to agree with pj it seems to naturally end on the penultimate line. Juliet

Juliet

Fri, 2006-03-24 21:26

I really like this. I have been reading the other poems and some writings. What can I say? This person's work is brilliant. Veyr entertaining.

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