Chomping Choclate....By: Barely Black Francis

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Fri, 2006-04-14 20:09

I truly enjoyed this exceptional piece of poetry. The imagery is excellent, and the breaks in the poem fit well. I can't really find any critisism for it though. I love the first line.

"It has been scientificaly proven that I am irresistable to woman of a certain age."

http://www.abctales.com/story/barely-black-francis/chomping-chocolate-ho...

Great read BBF, keep it up.

Sat, 2006-04-15 20:04

mikepyro

yeah, but silly doesn't mean it's bad. Heck, my best poems (and believe me they aren't that great) are complete nonsense, but I still enjoy writing them.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

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