Is that a body in the woods? by jfunt
Fri, 2007-02-09 20:16
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Is that a body in the woods? by jfunt
http://www.abctales.com/story/jfunt/body-woods
It's a strange one, this, but the rhythm sees it through.
I love the repetition; it works really well, apart from the bit about "or not, or not, or not" - that just seems like a wasted line. I'm sure you can do better, mr funt!
On the whole, a nice piece. I can see this working in performance better than written down. Thanks.
Gareth
Ho,I know it works better in proformance (I've heard him do it) -- you are so right Gareth, but not about the "or not, or not, or not", which when performed, like the whole thing, sounds great!
Nice one Jeff.
The Soluble Fish