request for feedback

Hi, welcome to the site. I am in no way any kind of accomplished critic. I like your story and felt that maybe with a bit more editing it would become an accompished piece. It reads well and it kept my interest. I wish i could say more but ill try and read again this week and add something else. regards

Thankyou for taking the time. This is a thrilling experience for me to have a virtual critic and my first contact on the site. I'll add more to my story this week. I read some of your pieces and liked them, especially the cherry picked Carrots one ('cherry picked carrots' - am I going mad?). I have three sons of my own, though still in primary school, so I was drawn in by your characters in Gingy Bottles. I am interested in doing a creative writing course myself, but would have to do it either online or in Sheffield very part-time, as I work part-time too. Is your experience of writing courses positive? This site is my first step. Thanks again.

It seems it was you, Stephen D, to whom I wrote recently regarding dreams on the Writing Tips place. Funny that.

further down the line at navigating this site I am now equipped to provide the URLs to my posts The short story is being worked on at present, the travel memoir is complete, having followed advice from members of this site. Thanks to those people who have given me such constructive crit on other threads.