The Quiet child by Ancl

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Mon, 2005-11-14 13:41

I thought this was wonderful. The rythm is great, although you may want to break into verses for greater readibility. Great ending.

Soraia

Mon, 2005-11-14 22:26

Cheers! That's the first response I've gotten so thank you! I'll take your advice!

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