another one from anonymouszebra

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another one from anonymouszebra

I liked this one even more than Hospital Food. Witty, slightly cynical, well-formed observations of human behaviour.

http://www.abctales.com/story/anonymouszebra/of-course-you-want-to-see-m...

http://www.abctales.com/story/anonymouszebra/unexpected this one is excellent too! this writer has a real ability to tell it from the narrators viewpoint - the whole structure of each piece reflects the narrators personality and really draws you in. My only real crit is that 'unexpected' and 'papers' are pretty long and my concentration wandered both times in the middle - but then i am tired, so it may just be me. Ty for 3 wonderful reads. though for me personally Hospital food just pips the post. Juliet

Juliet

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