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When the world.

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Mon, 2007-04-16 21:37
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QueenElf
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When the world.

http://www.abctales.com/story/katies-mummy/when-world

I liked this a lot. I do love rhyming poetry & I think this is well-controlled, neither too overdone or sentimental. I would lose some of the question marks though, it stands well without them.
Lisa.

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