The Sleeping Man

Yes, I thought the middle section to this was brilliant. The opening was a bit too slow, too many heys (just needs cutting a bit) and the ending I hated - because I was enjoying it so much and then it just stopped in a cute way. What I really liked was the unexpected turns it took, the larger than life next door neighbour who offers the guy a haircut and the description of the apartment. This line I didn't like, 'he lunged for my cock'. People in my experience rarely lunge for cocks. I think it could have been more subtle than that.