The voices: by NcholasJBrowne
Sat, 2006-01-14 22:58
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The voices: by NcholasJBrowne
Not bad at all. Very disturbing end and very original. I like it. My only complaint is I think u may have messed up the ending browne. Shouldn't it be realize? Instead of release. Or is that the way it goes? It takes away some of the power if a important word is misspelled. Good luck with your writing.