six immigrant controversies

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Sat, 2006-04-08 19:19

http://www.abctales.com/story/mulekick/six-immigrant-controversies

I really enjoyed the philosophical point this raises, and i could picture the dinner party scenario vividly. I think like the narrator i too have a religion of sorts - belief in the goodness of human nature.

It certainly made me think.

juliet

Sat, 2006-04-08 20:13

rokkitnite

I thought one through to four were very well realised... it was only at the fifth section that I felt things became a bit overwrought. I think that, with some shrewd tightening of the final third, this will be an excellent, robust piece.

Sun, 2006-04-09 02:59

liv hamilton

i like this piece a lot, some interesting points raised, and nicely done to separate the moments of thought into separate points. i like preachy, and i like wordy. but it does seem that in section 5 you've lost some of the understated strength of the first few points.

Sun, 2006-04-09 14:03

yan

I liked this. A similar conversation inspired me to write "contemplation," which deals with the excact same issues. Hear my music: http://music.download.com/3600-5-100795586.html

There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed -
Dennett

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