'Back to the Ocean' by Ari

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'Back to the Ocean' by Ari

Thought this story was really excellent..

http://www.abctales.com/abcplex/viewstory.cgi?s=23326

recieve a gold plated bud Ari - you deserve it!

a very kewl oceanic vibe.. enough respect!

markbrown
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Notice an ocean based bias this weekend Funky...
funky_seal
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Yeah.. after I spotted this story.. I jus had to keep the ocean theme going man. I'am a sucker for anything to do with the sea.
miss_tree
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ooooooh yes, is a great story, Ari
Ari
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Thank you - I was really worried after I posted this that it was too much like the K-PAX theme, but I feel much better about it now! Luvya all!
penmagic
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It was really vivid, especially the first paragraph or so, I could almost feel the sand under my toes- well done!
Stace
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I enjoyed this immensely! The idea that the smell of brine remained so strong on her that it came home was a marvelous detail. I didn't quite understand the separation, but perhaps I am not well-versed with the allusion.
sirat
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It's taken me a while to get around to it but I've read this one now and agree it's a great story, very memorable. There are folk songs about the "selkie" but I have never seen it spelled that way, I thought it was just "silkie". I was particularly interested in the relationship between the psychiatrist and his wife, I thought she would have shown a bit more jealousy about his "special" relationship with this pretty young girl in her mid twenties. And a bit more suspicion if he kept coming home with her "special" smell. Great story though, deserving of one of funky's gold-plated Budwiesers or whatever they are.
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