The Bobs by wortschatz

From an American point of view, please tell me what this was all about!

In reference to the story "The Bobs". From an "American" point of view, I didn't like this story, or was it a Poem? It was paiinful to read, not just from the content point of view, but also from the construction point of view. Perhaps, Wortschatz was making a statement about illiteracy by writing in an illiterate style. Having lived in the City referenced in the story, I don't think I ever read anything there of similar content. It was poorly disguised bigotry in my opinion. Wortschatz, I'm sure thought this was worth posting, I must see if he's done better work than this, which wouldn't be too dificult I imagine. Honest apprasial. Radio