Pimp & Prostittute by silverspunsand

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Pimp & Prostittute by silverspunsand

again - another good one sss. Also I liked the Air-Kisses poem. Congrats for the cherry!
One of my favourites of yours is A place they call Camelot. Really good.

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http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/pimp-and-prostitute I also liked this one, Tina (but a link would've helped me find it). Your poems have a way of churning along, and this one reads very well. Funny, too. foster
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http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/pimp-and-prostitute I also liked this one, Tina (but a link would've helped me find it). Your poems have a way of churning along, and this one reads very well. Funny, too. foster
a great rythmn and intriguing tale - my only crit - the last line didn't work for me, don't think it needs the 'on' Juliet

Juliet

Ta so much Sky and Foster and Juliet. By the way - I quite agree. Have taken out the offending word!! Ty all SSS

 

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