Joe's poem.

Hello everyone. A friend of mine last night told me that her eleven year old son, Joe wrote a poem at school. I said that I would put it on this site, hoping that the poets would comment and give advice. I am hopeless when it comes to poetry, so my input would have been worthless. I realise that all submissions are not meant to be placed in the forum, and I hope that I don't upset anyone by doing so.

DEFYING GRAVITY

Defying gravity like being in the sky flying high
Wild westerly wind
You have to work hard
Never give up
Feeling free
Scaling a tree
Never let your fears get to you
Power on through
Hanging on a hand holding hook
Zoom!
High in the sky

Joe