Valentine

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Valentine

If i was looking for a valentines poem to read to my sweetheart this year I wouldn't bother trailing through books or looking much further than lexys' poem valentine. I think undoubtedly this is one the best modern romantic poems i have ever read.

The opening line

'Your arms are like soft woolen blankets'

and it gets better.

www.abctales.com/story/56726

s.d
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Yeah well its snide and personel like you have just done again. You really dont have to look further than your last two comments. lol
Mark Yelland-Brown
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In defence of Lexy s.d. why have you over reacted so much? There's obviously no malice intended. I've re-read the postings and you come over really unecessarily rude! Methinks an apology is in order.
s.d
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eh, most of it was said in humour maybe a bit toxic, but, never the less in humour...and do you think lexys inital comment wasn't rude. methinks you should maybe read lexys comment again But any lexie if it makes you feel better and you think itt is ok to say stuff like that to soem who reads your work and then critics it, ok. Sorry if i offended you. i must be right out of order to answer back.
s.d
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Yeah well i maybe picked it up wrong. When you find your physical life surrounded by ignorant people sometimes you can jump and take innocent comments the wrong way when you rad them online. Truly sorry Lexy, i did appreciate your poems and when i see them posted with your id i generally do read them and will continue to do. regards stephen oh, happy valentines day
s.d
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Really embarressed now:(, at least i dont hide but, on the epsoitive side of it all, like. sorry again everyone x
Mark Yelland-Brown
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s.d it's so rare to get anyone to apologise for anything. I thought I was going to get a mouthful for being so presumptive. Your honesty is really encouraging, especially when people can be so abrasive on these threads.. I'm babbling because you're so disarming. Bless You!
lexy
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S.D, thank you for your apology, on a medium such as this I guess it's hard to gauge direction, there was no malice on my part intended. Again thank you. [%sig%]
Steve
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I object to the line: "Your arms are like soft, woolen blankets..." I suppose this person is really hairy, but EVEN THEN, soft woolen blankets? SOFT WOOLEN BLANKETS? On the other hand, there is a Caucasian minority in Japan called the Ainu who are really hairy. It's so nice of you to write a poem to the Ainu of Japan who are fiercely discrimated against. Poor Ainu. The poem almost made me cry.
stephen d
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Oh that was me who posted.
stephen d
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Very romantic then Very funny
Lexy number four
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I'm duplicate; well I guess its kinda fitting that the person who likes my poem isn't truly sure who they are. I have the same uncertainties several times a day. Thank you whoever you decide on, lol [%sig%]
s.d
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That was maybe a bit more than needed but hey i guess your a pysciatrist or something like that, unlucky you. wont critic your work again.
s.d
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In fact, i don't believe that snide personel dig, do us anyone else reading this think its right that if some one takes time out to read, and, which i am a very busy at college just now getting my modules up to merit standard that they should have a little snide insult. your a joke mate. It would have been a different matter if it wa son the discussion forums but i actually went over your poem for 5-10mins. I never seen any one else take time out to read your two 'cherry picked' poems. Maybe the should have had 'raspberrys' next to them.
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