Held Hostage / Timmack
Thu, 2004-07-29 16:55
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Held Hostage / Timmack
Tim,
Hey buddy. You and I were dealing with the same things at the same time. I was down in GITMO when that thing went down and we were asked to participate. I ended up baking on a runway for two days without ever getting that last call to do it. I can identify with that period quiete well and when I saw your story I had to read it. Wasn't it great working for Jimmy Carter?
You've got some iinteresting material here and you tell a pretty darn good Sea-story too, but your writing is a little bit too sloppy for publishing quality. Keep at it my fellow squid. You're a good story teller, just polish that prose.