Dixie - bbf

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Thu, 2006-03-02 10:48

fergal

Dixie - bbf

http://www.abctales.com/story/barely-black-francis/dixie

I like this a lot - if only for this image:

he asked him to peel pool balls
eat them like oranges

But the whole rhythm of this works, as does the ending.

Thu, 2006-03-02 11:16

span

This is brilliant! The first stanza I love. The pool balls peeled like oranges. Brilliant. Love the odd detail, love the immediacy of the character. Span

Thu, 2006-03-02 13:33

Foster

You can do some amazing things with very few words - this poem among them.

Thu, 2006-03-02 14:12

Brooklands

Yes - I liked this alot. chasing CSA respondents Ace! Joe

Fri, 2006-03-03 18:28

Juliet OC

i could actually see him at the bus stop. classic. Juliet

Juliet

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