Intimacy

This is a a new twist on the love at first sight theme and handled with the sort of efficiency that we would expect from the Captain. I love the name of the author: drew_gummerson - is this male or female, a pseudonym or an anigram - as Salvador Dali can be rearranged as Avida Dollars, and how appropriate in a surreal rather than material sort of way. Whoever it is, the story sustains you till the end and although readers on ABC have a tendency to advise writers to cut their material, I would say this is a mistake. It is the problem of reading online, we are constantly tempted to open another tab where, in a book, we enjoy the white plain of the page, the caligraphy pattern of the words. So Drew, don't shrink it and keep it up.