The Immortal Miss Jude - Any feedback would be welcome!

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Thu, 2007-09-06 11:02

About a year ago I posted my first story on ABC Tales. I didn't get any interest from publishers - looking at it now I realise it's overlong with, I suspect, too many characters. But as I finalise my second book I wondered what people thought of the first. I'm looking for honesty here, I'm a big boy I can take it.

Thu, 2007-09-06 12:48

patmac

Why don't you write a short story and then review others' short stories, and let them review yours? A novel is a big piece of writing for someone to struggle through if they don't already know that they like your writing style. Kind regards, Pat My latest killing is: http://www.bookscape.co.uk/short_stories/human_sacrifice.php

My latest killing is:
http://www.bookscape.co.uk/short_stories/human_sacrifice.php

Thu, 2007-09-06 20:56

soulfunk1

Cheers Pat that's a good point. When I've drafted the second novel I may well get round to that - I've got a few ideas. I suppose I was really directing the comment to all the people who read it (I posted the book in chapters so I would know if people were reading it and not just having a quick look). In the meantime I'll have a look at yours. You worked that one well!

Mon, 2007-09-10 13:42

styx

Well I hope Ms. Jude is immortal.

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