Appreciating Constructive Criticism & Individual's Perceptions On My Work

As the title says, i would greatly appreciate it if fellow members of this site could spare a few minutes of their time to read three of my best poems. Friends have told me that they are good but some fail to truly understand the deeper messages behind my work. Here I believe that other writers will be able to give valuable advice on my writing techniques and poetry itself, by also portray their view of my writing. I acknowledge that my contributions on this site are not too frequent however this site, from what I have experienced slightly, does contain an impressively supporting community and one which I would like to be more involved in; thus why I have come to the forums. So without further hesitation, here are my three poems:

http://www.abctales.com/story/parkster/dead-end-affection-dilemma

http://www.abctales.com/story/parkster/wheres-home

http://www.abctales.com/story/parkster/were-prey

Thank you to anyone who could spare the time to critique these pieces, I will be very grateful for your support.

Regards, the parkster :)