The Trouble With White by Zimmy

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Tue, 2002-02-19 16:44

Been doing a bit of 'spike clearing' as traffic is so heavy on the site at the moment and came across this little gem. Give it a whirl. It's number is:

http://www.abctales.com/abcplex/viewstory.cgi?s=16991

Congratulations to Zimmy!

I'd be interested to see what others make of it!

Tue, 2002-02-19 17:03

stormy

by coincidence I have just read that too and came here to say a similar thing Tony. I read his other story too which I thought was equally good. Absorbing stuff about the minutia of life.

Wed, 2002-02-20 13:55

hovis

It's really magical - I love the barefoot scene in the restaurant - nothing was out of place, perfectly set and dressed. Shame the writer's only got the two.

Wed, 2002-02-20 20:29

justyn_thyme

I agree. It's really well done.

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