Mutt The Immortal

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Mutt The Immortal
Jasper
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Hey, S < topic> ...like that
Jasper
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"with a St. Pauli Girl in a paper bag dress" ...Is that a girlee magazine or what? And Red hook ......is that wine or a beer over yonder? I also knew a girl once who liked to suck face! But from what I heard, Josephine claimed he came up short in far more places than just Waterloo! Interesting S...now spill the beans!
seannelson
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I just edited it to make it a more polished piece. "Red Hook" is a quality beer as is "St. Pauli Girl." The poem is really just about a scraggly but sweet dog I petted outside the minute market. Jasper, I really appreciate you taking the time to read this one; I really worked hard on it.
Jasper
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Ahhhhh....I was hoping St Pauli was a girlee mag.......it would give both the puppy and the Scarlet Lady on the end of a chain, credence here in this one, S....Red Hook need not be defined......if you know what I mean? But if it's only a dog...I'll accept your O as such... lol! I really admire you work, S....I get bombarded with a plethora of flora and fauna all at once!
seannelson
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Jasper, I am aware of alternative ways this poem could be read. While I was just thinking of the friendly dog when I wrote it, it's not my role to guide the interpretation of my poems. And you can't know how much your "admiration" means to me. I write to be read. Also, everybody, you may be interested in my latest post, which contains one of my better poems and an explanatory essay. I wrote it for a college assignment but it's actually rather amusing. Here's the link: http://www.abctales.com/Members/seannelson/welcometognarledtown/onthenel... asta la vista, Sean
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