Surd_A_B: Digholes

This is such bitter/sweet lament, it made me smile for hours....I think your form and expression here is short, direct, and very well done S.

"A sax mourns wail fully outside "...I found this line problematic...it needs to be crisp?

maybe "A soulful Sax wails inside"???????

As a penguin, I loved it..thank you!