Junkmail by Jack Cade

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Tue, 2006-03-28 13:53

This works so well until the end - when it just falls away. Did work come to an end? Did the boss spot you typing? Please give us an ending:

http://www.abctales.com/story/jack-cade/junkmail

Tue, 2006-03-28 19:51

Juliet OC

a great idea and well executed - I love the idea that there are so many people believing the junk, just lke those competitions that claim you are a winner, then charge you premium rates. i am not sure if it is finished or not, but once the TV ad kicks in i do get a bit lost and it does seem to fade rather than end. Juliet

Juliet

Wed, 2006-03-29 21:38

Jack Cade

"Did work come to an end?" Pretty much! I thought I could survive leaving the main story at that point. On rereading, I agree it just stops. I need more stuff before the advert. I'm in Aberystwyth now, but I'll add something in when I get back! ~ This be where I keeps me treasures: www.tyrants.co.uk This be where I goes to get me fix: www.fuselit.co.uk Yarr.

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