CASUAL SEX by Juno

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Tue, 2006-06-13 15:09

CASUAL SEX by Juno

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I like the honesty of the this poem. I like its simple to the point lines: 'with sometimes blond hair and average blue eyes', and its easy rhymes.
I think we all understand the sentiments ' if you've been there.
Chris

Wed, 2006-06-14 13:57

Juliet OC

i agree that this very honest and i nodded in agreement a no. of times, i did feel it was a little long, and seem to say all it had to say then repeated it. imo-' juicy meat' verse and 'the world is too small' verse don't add to the poem. Juliet

Juliet

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