Zzzzzzzzzzz by Carlos Fandango
http://www.abctales.com/abcplex/viewStory.cgi?s=4761
Here I am recommending Zzzzzzzz by Carlos Fandango, because it's my favourite thing the random story generator has come up with thus far (except when it gave me one of my own poems.)
First of all, the man has a kickass name. I always like that.
Now, I'll have to read it more thoroughly, but the language moves almost in the manner of a stream of consciousness, except in stops and starts. One scene and one voice emerge for a paragraph, then become another just as they're almost settled. It becomes a slide show...reminds me of some aspects of the film Amelie.
Some wonderful lines too : "As he kisses my lover on the back of the neck. Her skin quivered, giving off a sent of CK1."
"My existence is free, I’m miscellaneous various, I’m shaved and naked."



