Einstien Smiling: Waves and HI

Interesting work, whomever you are...I love rhyme! Liz Barret did it well from what little I've ever heard or read of her.

This is kinda warm and fuzzy in a very zany sort of way, and I'd love to make a few suggestions if you not to precious ES?

I love a poem that sings while says something about loves rythm....that's all....nothing major mind you, just a little interchange here and there and a bit more containment in your word choice and position....to sure up a constant flow of rythm and meaning sts!