Hole by patrick_allard
Wed, 2005-12-14 03:32
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Anonymous
Hole by patrick_allard
Well done. I felt I was him throughout. And I like the way you used the words to illustrate certain images.
I wished it to keep going...VERY well done.
archergirl
I liked this one, too. I had to skim over some of it due to time constraints, but I'll definitely get back for a thorough reading. Very good writing !