The opposite of orphan - JulietOC

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The opposite of orphan - JulietOC

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'just a rewrite of a story I did a few weeks back'.

The only 'just' thing about this piece is that it is 'just' heart-breaking. A story told sensitively and beautifully - if that is the way to describe it. Ty Juliet - SSS

ty SSS for the flag - i am trying to experiment with my emotional boundaries in writing - i'm glad you got a sense of what i am trying to convey. How to write something that is heartbreaking but not over sentimental - i would appreciate others comments on this, even if they are less than positive. Juliet

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