Fake by Ermentrude
Wed, 2006-05-17 20:17
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Fake by Ermentrude
http://www.abctales.com/story/ermentrude/fake
Hi Ermentrude,
yes, this could be easily over looked. I read it a few times. It has a great feel. And 'Beyond a yonder....' ' neat! Also, 'pushes pigment at lightening speeds' some great phrases.
keep it up!
Chris