Veni, Vidi, Vici Critique please.

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Wed, 2013-03-27 17:59

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Veni, Vidi, Vici Critique please.

Could I get some in-depth feedback on my short intro? Thanks.

http://www.abctales.com/story/grachamoncha/veni-vidi-vici

Wed, 2013-03-27 20:21

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I left you a comment.