new member, need feedback

Janeve, I was really impressed with'A wonderful dream'. You've proved that you can write, it's now just a question of what you write about! I liked 'dancing' as well, the description of emotion and interior state was good. You have a good eye for the emotional content of experience. I think maybe what you have to do now is look at some direction to point your writing in, which is often the hardest part of writing, finding out what you want to say rather than working on how to say it. I like 'a wonderful dream' because it told me something about your(?) world and how you see it, full of little details and incidents. Your style as it is in 'a wonderful dream' can carry emotion well, and frankly, I'd love to read more in that vein. Hope this is of some help.

Hey! I have an uncle from Holland, Michigan!! He doesn't live there now, though. Anyway...I loved your "A Wonderful Dream." I really felt the emotion. Keep writing!