My story.
Wed, 2004-01-07 16:43
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My story.
Purely selfish and I know it. I am looking for some good old-fashioned creative criticism from my fellow writers regarding my story (just posted this morning) "The Weary Woozy Wonderful World of Childbirth". It can be found in the Humour section. If you have any feedback, positive, negative or passive, please let me know. As much as messages such as "It sucked!" and "Cool!" get the point across, a more detailed explanation would be appreciated. Thanks much, and I look forward to your replies!----Justin Lambert
schembri
I make it a point of mine never to pass comment on anything I read on this site, I guess because I really don't have enough confidence with my own writing, heck, I'd have to have a right nerve to pass any sort of judgement regarding anyone elses talents. It's just that your story made me cry! Maybe I am an over emotional woman and I realise your story was intended to bring a smile to the reader but for me it was just so moving. I cant tell you why I loved it, maybe because Im a mum, who knows. I just found the whole thing very moving.
Ros Lloyd
It would be great if you could supply us with a link to this, 'cos I can't find it. Sorry!