Uralcola - a love letter
Fri, 2006-05-19 08:59
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Uralcola - a love letter
http://www.abctales.com/story/uralcola/a-love-letter
I liked this - it reminded me of Thomas Hardy - both in rhythm and sentiment. Lots of unspoken suggestion in a gentle, lilting structure.
I enjoyed the mundane observations; there is a melancholic note to it, almost fatalistic. As galfreda says, the structure is lilting and almost sing-song. Interesting!