RE: Promise me. Chapter 1.
Mon, 2008-09-01 20:48
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RE: Promise me. Chapter 1.
Topic posted in response to Promise me. Chapter 1. : http://www.abctales.com/story/xwriterx/promise-me-chapter-1
I don't think its that good =[
tcook
It doesn't have any real substance, that's the problem. It's not really a set up for more to come as we don't get to know the characters in any real way. You don't have to lay it all out on a plate but you do have to tease and tantalise so that the reader is enticed to want more.