Typical American

Well, I did it last night. Confirmed my national heritage and contribruted to the global energy crisis.

I purchased a brand new, really big, red, 4x4 Sport Utility Vehicle. It probably gets 2 miles to the gallon and can hold an entire football team (British or American.) So, now I have a really big 5 year old blue 4x4 pickup truck and a really big red 4x4 SUV. Next week, a sports car.

It's good to live alone.

Dennis Kotobelli.

I'm not going to send any of my work to someone who can't spell you properly.

Bobbie Kilzer- simply unique

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Marie....

Fish Siesta by mcmanaman

http://www.abctales.com/mcmanaman/fish_sestina

I liked this but I think it needs to be cooked down and reduced, like a sauce, to highten its flavour.

There's loads of good stuff in it, but it's a bit watery. What it needs is less volume, so that the individual flavours can become more pronounced.

I reckon it'd be possible to boil it down by half.

What does anyone else reckon?

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