God, this is briiliant, this is ABSOLUTELY Brilliant....I have run out of adjectives, sorry. I thought the story was briiliant, the swearing appropriate and real, ....did I say this was brilliant?
Think I'm supposed to say something clever about poems, but when something just hits me, especially the way words are used, I just have to say how much i liked it.
Jumped off and bit me. Well sharp.
I'm wondering, is this the best place to try out novel chapters? Or is it more suited to short stories and poems?
On that point, my "Bag of Weasels" stuff seems to have started out well, then gone down the pan somewhat. I wonder if anyone who's read any of it would feel free to comment.
I know I am particularly bad at commenting on items flagged up in this forum ... not because the pieces concerned don't jangle my bits but moreso because I find myself thinking "that was good" or "that was nice" or "Yep!" and knowing that if I say "that was good", "that was nice" and "yep!" comes across as trite, I tend to remain schtum.
However, sometimes what I read drags me into an author's portfolio and I end up reading their whole gamut (and I realise some of their work has been flagged already but I don't care).
I only raise this to comment on Narcissa. Brilliant, I love it. Like Pepsiod too, it really works with his writing. Camus is a real hero of mine, so I like that...and Barely Black Francis is great too.
Anyone else got any favorites?
Ben
PS I hate my own and am thinking of writing under a new one.
For Gywnnie and Chris, after all they obviously need a little guidance in that area....I suggest Advocado Martin for a boy and Sugar Snap Martin for a girl.
I'm Adas and I just joined up on here, mainly to see how my little writings are received. So if anyone has an opinion, please throw it my way. Anything at all, I'd appreciate it a lot. Well, thank you.
