Hi everyone, I'm new to ABC tales and new to writing as well. I've done one very short piece so far, and you can find it here:
http://www.abctales.com/node/545839
I'd really appreciate any feedback you guys have, as I'm looking to improve myself as a writer. English was never my best subject at school so you'll have to forgive the poor grammar, but it will improve with time, I'm sure.