Control... by anna marie

http://www.abctales.com/anna_marie/control

Dunno about you, but I find writing sexily one of the hardest things (pardon the pun) to do. As you may have noticed, I have not tried to do it (pardon the¦ etc) in any of my writings on ABC. It's hard (¦) not to sound as if you are copy'n'pasting from a 'How to Write Porn' manual¦

He put his fingers in her soft, moist pussy.
She took hold of his hard, throbbing member.
He gently nibbled on her pert, bullet-like nipples.

...etc ¦etc ¦etc.

How does one introduce originality, while keeping it sexy? Because if you aren't 'turned on' by the piece, what's the point?

That said, the above piece is quite sexy, although I'd say it does fall into some of the traps of 'amateur erotica' ' a few clichés, cringeworthy moments, etc. However, being a heterosexual male, just the mention of 'lady-on-lady action' makes me go a bit tingly. Oh come on, guys, you know what I mean!

Well anyway, I won't go any deeper (!!!) into this topic, in case my girlfriend or any of my family are reading.

A brave attempt at a difficult genre, Anna Marie!

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