I'm not going to send any of my work to someone who can't spell you properly.

Hai... I am really enjoying the writings of Bobbie Kilzer Gogain --- quite novel subjects... Guys, go through Bobbie's works...

Like.... http://www.abctales.com/bobbiego/greetin_card_writer

Marie....

http://www.abctales.com/mcmanaman/fish_sestina

I liked this but I think it needs to be cooked down and reduced, like a sauce, to highten its flavour.

There's loads of good stuff in it, but it's a bit watery. What it needs is less volume, so that the individual flavours can become more pronounced.

I reckon it'd be possible to boil it down by half.

What does anyone else reckon?

Wow. Does anyone post here anymore?

I've been playing around on the random story page and stumbled across frank_little, he only has 7/8 stories posted, and they are nothing more than snippets, but they are very entertaining reads. Would be nice to see him post up more.

http://www.abctales.com/user/46488