http://www.abctales.com/node/543327
Apologies for a moment of self indulgence. I wrote this story recently and was, of course delighted that it was cherried. It was a departure fro me, writing in a different voice, trying to create a character completetly separate from myself and making them feel real.
I don't know if I achieved that realness, if he was a credible narrator. I wondered if anyone had any thoughts on it.
Thanks
Tim