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That's beautiful!
Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019
That's beautiful!
You have time as well as space in here, both your time there and future when the crops have grown. And the way the last line opens up is wonderful
I remember the lorry one, it was very funny :0) Have your whippets really caught squirrels??? My lurcher never did, but would sing/yelp/whine under trees as if his enthusiasm would make them fall out dazed. Whippets are the most beautiful...
This is amazing and brilliant, best thing I have ever read on this subject.
My son was in care for a while and we were told we might not get him back. People thought it was a consolation we might meet him when he was grown up. It is...
I used to like taking pictures (can't get them in focus now) but I think you are right, something about how you have to objectify what you see, to make it fit into the frame, diminishes it. To stand there and soak in the sunset, to ACCEPT it,...
I like all the layers in this, exploring so many ideas, whether we work to live or live to work, if you can live forever as a virtual mind in an artificial body, if that is the way mankind will colonise space, space debris, loss of resources. I...
I know what it feels like when all the voices get too loud and it's like they are battering you, you describe it so well. And then going outside where there are birds which can fly, it's a great contrast, the lightness after the heaviness. Also,...
Made me think of a patchwork eiderdown made of gauzy mists, black velvet inside caves, shimmering satin clouds, thick embroidery of hedges, like reliving memories as you sew it together with words.
That's beautiful!
Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019
That's beautiful!
You have time as well as space in here, both your time there and future when the crops have grown. And the way the last line opens up is wonderful
Read full commentPosted in On Pippin’s Hill
I remember the lorry one, it
Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019
I remember the lorry one, it was very funny :0) Have your whippets really caught squirrels??? My lurcher never did, but would sing/yelp/whine under trees as if his enthusiasm would make them fall out dazed. Whippets are the most beautiful...
Read full commentPosted in He said I was Whippety (Rimus Dissolutas)
This is amazing and brilliant
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
This is amazing and brilliant, best thing I have ever read on this subject.
My son was in care for a while and we were told we might not get him back. People thought it was a consolation we might meet him when he was grown up. It is...
Read full commentPosted in Roots
I used to like taking
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019
I used to like taking pictures (can't get them in focus now) but I think you are right, something about how you have to objectify what you see, to make it fit into the frame, diminishes it. To stand there and soak in the sunset, to ACCEPT it,...
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (8)
I like all the layers in this
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019
I like all the layers in this, exploring so many ideas, whether we work to live or live to work, if you can live forever as a virtual mind in an artificial body, if that is the way mankind will colonise space, space debris, loss of resources. I...
Read full commentPosted in What is True?
Enjoyed this so much.
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019
Enjoyed this so much.
Read full commentPosted in Conversation of a Tree
I know what it feels like
Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019
I know what it feels like when all the voices get too loud and it's like they are battering you, you describe it so well. And then going outside where there are birds which can fly, it's a great contrast, the lightness after the heaviness. Also,...
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (6)
It's sort of like Shirley
Posted on Sat, 02 Mar 2019
It's sort of like Shirley tipped the balance away from money towards humanity
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (3)
Watch out Michael Dobbs!
Posted on Sat, 02 Mar 2019
Watch out Michael Dobbs!
The last line is a great twist in the tale
Read full commentPosted in Scoop
Made me think of a patchwork
Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019
Made me think of a patchwork eiderdown made of gauzy mists, black velvet inside caves, shimmering satin clouds, thick embroidery of hedges, like reliving memories as you sew it together with words.
"The way I go is over quilts
Of...
Read full commentPosted in That's Not The Way I Go
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