143 of my comments have received 144 Great Feedback votes
You've conveyed all your
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
You've conveyed all your feelings brilliantly, specially how jobs are seen as defining people, so not having one makes a person a blob. And yet not having a specific shape/a slot to fit into, makes you able to go anywhere, the possibility of...Read full comment
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
BRILLIANT!!! This is absolute magic :0)
love "pale posy bunches" "coin wings" Wow! "seed-bulge" perfect . Also "far beyond their leafing"
well, all of it, really!
Insert, i wasn't sure what the trees across the road...Read full comment
Posted in The fruit of the elm
Very interesting to read his
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018
Very interesting to read his story. I only really knew of him from hearing an interview about how by the time they let working class people into Oxford it was so dummed down there was no point going there, and that the elites never accepted him...Read full comment
Posted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I
You are quite right Tom, it's
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....Read full comment
Posted in time travelling
he is not ashamed to "come
Posted on Sun, 21 Apr 2019
he is not ashamed to "come out" as a murderer, yet some of his people are afraid simply to love.
you were deemed "horrible" yet someone who assaulted you to amuse his friends is elite
money is a mirror that makes morality the...Read full comment
Posted in Throwing Stones
you write of a friendlier
Posted on Thu, 18 Apr 2019
you write of a friendlier time. So much changed when supermarkets opened. I guess when supermarkets are all self service or home delivery today's children will remember the weekly shop there as a loss too, one more chance for human contact gone....Read full comment
Posted in The Milkman
oh Rhiannon THIS IS GORGEOUS!
Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019
oh Rhiannon THIS IS GORGEOUS!!!
love "sudden spillage"
"escapes from farmer’s fields to anywhere"
you have caught the sense of wildness perfectly!
"but by the woods more in the shade, the...Read full comment
Posted in Golden Blast at the Roadside
"... and good poets make it
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
"... and good poets make it into something better, or at least something different.”
well, you are a good poet :0) This poem seems to me like a display cabinet where you have carefully curated lines by great writers to make the reader...Read full comment
Posted in London's Burning