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We're the biggest stone in the wall but we don't sit straight, almost fall each time we ask why are we here? This is our free will, to feel fear yet...
When sun rules the year and all frost's armies turned to mist long burned up like cold caution warm calm, balmy days come seeming ceaseless. Wearing...
"a careful weave of courage" is wonderful! Thankyou for putting a link to the photo, too, neater sewing than mine and am not even using grass. Is good to read a hopeful poem from you, hope things better today
what an image, lashing rain and sweep of a samurai sword! You evoke the storm brilliantly, from the first 3 fierce lines to the colours and slowing at the end making me think of the stillness after
yur 4333;'/?????????????$%Rrrrrrr (message from Tina, I hope you undrrstand it, is probably saying mine is rude so don't read it. I apologise very much if it is?)
this makes me think the past is hard and dark like the moon, and your...
Hope your medicine helps? This is a dark poem for the dark time of year. The differences between passing leaves and lasting stone. The last two lines are so good. You seem as sad as when you started posting on here, lots of good wishes going...
Even as we put on masks to save ourselves, becoming aware of transience of posessions. Also as we distance from the living, thoughts of death are always close. Very good points, really well put! And a positive ending :0)
So many billions of ties of
Posted on Mon, 26 Oct 2020
So many billions of ties of love we have broken without thought. The distress, confusion, despair.
I think I remember a David Attenborough program about Clara. She did survive about half the lifetime she should have had, didn't she? The...
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Oh! This is a treat!So GOOD
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2020
Oh! This is a treat!So GOOD to have a magic story from you. Really looking forward to the next part
Read full commentPosted in Behold The Faerie Realm
"a careful weave of courage"
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2020
"a careful weave of courage" is wonderful! Thankyou for putting a link to the photo, too, neater sewing than mine and am not even using grass. Is good to read a hopeful poem from you, hope things better today
Read full commentPosted in A Tailor Bird’s Song To A Spider
beautiful
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2020
beautiful
Read full commentPosted in The Red
what an image, lashing rain
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2020
what an image, lashing rain and sweep of a samurai sword! You evoke the storm brilliantly, from the first 3 fierce lines to the colours and slowing at the end making me think of the stillness after
Read full commentPosted in Samurai
yur 4333;'/?????????????$
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020
yur 4333;'/?????????????$%Rrrrrrr (message from Tina, I hope you undrrstand it, is probably saying mine is rude so don't read it. I apologise very much if it is?)
this makes me think the past is hard and dark like the moon, and your...
Read full commentPosted in The Walrus and the Pearl
Hope your medicine helps?
Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2020
Hope your medicine helps? This is a dark poem for the dark time of year. The differences between passing leaves and lasting stone. The last two lines are so good. You seem as sad as when you started posting on here, lots of good wishes going...
Read full commentPosted in November
Even as we put on masks to
Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2020
Even as we put on masks to save ourselves, becoming aware of transience of posessions. Also as we distance from the living, thoughts of death are always close. Very good points, really well put! And a positive ending :0)
Read full commentPosted in A Changed World
You have covered EVERYTHING.
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020
You have covered EVERYTHING. I like your busy rhythm, and the clever rhymes at the end
Read full commentPosted in Jobs
Loved this! Brilliant for the
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020
Loved this! Brilliant for the beginning of Autumn! Particularly liked the idea of the waiting sky
Read full commentPosted in House Ghost
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