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this meeting of trees and rushes glows, peaceful as a holy place warbler songs shimmer warm blue air where speckled wood butterflies dance from spine...
Very interesting to read his story. I only really knew of him from hearing an interview about how by the time they let working class people into Oxford it was so dummed down there was no point going there, and that the elites never accepted him...
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....
I LOVE all your descriptions!
"And the music - that magical, twirling, barrel organ music Tom only ever heard at the fair. For the first time they could smell the warm, sugary whiff of it in their nostrils - the toffee and popcorn and candy...
One bright side is that, if you had got super successful ages ago, all of us on ABCTales now might not have known about your writing, and got to tell you how much we love it? Also, your life might not have been so rich, all the people you have...
BRILLIANT!!!
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
BRILLIANT!!! This is absolute magic :0)
love "pale posy bunches" "coin wings" Wow! "seed-bulge" perfect . Also "far beyond their leafing"
well, all of it, really!
Insert, i wasn't sure what the trees across the road...
Read full commentPosted in The fruit of the elm
Very interesting to read his
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018
Very interesting to read his story. I only really knew of him from hearing an interview about how by the time they let working class people into Oxford it was so dummed down there was no point going there, and that the elites never accepted him...
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I
You are quite right Tom, it's
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....
Read full commentPosted in time travelling
I am glad Tom got out without
Posted on Sat, 24 Jan 2026
I am glad Tom got out without really knowing what had happened. Russel's fear must have made it worse, very scary for both. Brilliant writing!
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone (9) (ii)
I LOVE all your descriptions!
Posted on Sat, 24 Jan 2026
I LOVE all your descriptions!
Read full comment"And the music - that magical, twirling, barrel organ music Tom only ever heard at the fair. For the first time they could smell the warm, sugary whiff of it in their nostrils - the toffee and popcorn and candy...
Posted in Tom All Alone (9) (i)
I love all the colours! You
Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2026
I love all the colours! You have communicated so well the magic of Dawn
Read full commentPosted in "Crimson Morning"
Perfect, Rhiannon, all the
Posted on Thu, 22 Jan 2026
Perfect, Rhiannon, all the word sounds and that way you have of making the last line still and comforting somehow
Read full commentPosted in Dark and dreary …
One bright side is that, if
Posted on Wed, 21 Jan 2026
One bright side is that, if you had got super successful ages ago, all of us on ABCTales now might not have known about your writing, and got to tell you how much we love it? Also, your life might not have been so rich, all the people you have...
Read full commentPosted in 4. Away with Words (i)
Sherlock sounds like a really
Posted on Mon, 19 Jan 2026
Sherlock sounds like a really good friend. I like the juxtaposition of this bit very much -
Above us, the stars were scattered like glitter on a blackboard, and a crescent moon rode a cloud like a beached galleon in the night. And yeah, I...
Read full commentPosted in 3. An Expedition To The Pole (iii)
Agree with all above comments
Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2026
Agree with all above comments, this is wonderful
Read full commentPosted in 3. An Expedition To The Pole (ii)
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