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Lethe

Forgetting things is so scary like standing on a bank a river is eating away at. My Dad died of dementia unable to talk. My son hates that I want to...
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It's all about bread

It is important to be able to look down on your enemy. Though they are not enemies rather bread and butter. That sort of spongy white pap I wouldn't...
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emperor's new clothes

Invisible the air is cut and sewn when whistles, chirps and warbles sweetly shear off from the rolls of space, as silk ribon freed catches light,...
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Sol Monath (mud month in old english)

frost a cold kindness makes scars of passage reopened each day numb, unhealing. New sun brings back feeling warms clenched stone knuckles and knee...

Chutes of Spring

*/ Freshet chill blue ceiling full clouds uncoil loosedrops cold spool, pool till slow supple surface slope-called, slips dimples ripple, demure...
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128 of my comments have received 129 Great Feedback votes

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this is so good, you have all

Posted on Wed, 29 Aug 2018

this is so good, you have all the fascinating busyness and movement, the equivalent of our day and night.  I find swirling seaweed mesmerising so particularly liked the second verse as it reminds me of this dreamy feeling of seeing another world...

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Posted in Inter-tidal life

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This needs a bit of effort,

Posted on Fri, 24 Aug 2018

This needs a bit of effort, like opening a geode, then more and more bits start to sparkle

"snakes that lie in wait"

"To chase raw deliverance and

Shun the safety of the paved way"

"Both cowardly and brave

To...

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Posted in The Dirt Road

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This is one of your

Posted on Sat, 25 Aug 2018

This is one of your alliteration masterpieces! Using the sounds and rhythm as a way to say the same thing as the words' meaning, it's so clever! I think this is one of my favourites of yours so far :0)

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Posted in Sharing

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Enjoyed this. Lots of great

Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018

Enjoyed this. Lots of great descriptions, particularly liked falling on the sofa in a dingy heap, and how his wet shoes sounded like squishing bugs.

Where you first mention students, do you need "the"?

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Posted in The Last Case of Dr. Jonah Wexley Abbott (Pt. 1)

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you have great skill making

Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018

you have great skill making lots of facts easy and enjoyable to read. I had no idea Norway had a potato famine.

I liked the way you mixed a wider history in with your family's history, too. And that you have been able to write something...

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Posted in The Shipping Line Clock

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Great rhythm you have cought

Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018

Great rhythm you have cought the music of the storm and made it into words

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Posted in Storm

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lots of good lines,  what a

Posted on Sat, 11 Aug 2018

the first bit - what a way to describe how someone sounds!

also very much liked :

"Tonight grows older

than I can handle"

 

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Posted in I AM HOMELESS

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gosh, the stress!

Posted on Mon, 23 Jul 2018

gosh, the stress!

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Posted in Saturday Part One.

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Happy Birthday for September

Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018

Happy Birthday for September :0)

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Posted in DISCOVERY

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Within 15 minutes of the Head

Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018

Within 15 minutes of the Head talking she on the verge of a full house.

should that be he's ? Marking a teacher :0)

I liked the Cheese Club nods. And the school without running water sounds like something Dickens...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 4

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