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finding peace

As I fish fur from my coffee mug the rhythm of your purr's like the chug of the ferry bringing people home or strangers, who from far places come...
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left over

these are the left over years life reduced, the womb dry. If I were a vegetable I would be limp but I am stiffening, from the fingers in and my...
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Sum of the storm

wind worm winds through rough woos trees, shatters these breathing roofs; leaves scatter. In the aftermath trunks, reaching equal signs cross blank...
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time travelling

at woods' edge shadow-silt nestles lumps of amber air floating ballrooms where midges dance brief lives away since before words on one side sun warm...
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first day in senior school

Rain heavy air, clear, fresh colours drenched. I walk through clinging grasses like hands welcoming. Summer condensing on twig ends in rowan berries...

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157 of my comments have received 158 Great Feedback votes

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This needs a bit of effort,

Posted on Fri, 24 Aug 2018

This needs a bit of effort, like opening a geode, then more and more bits start to sparkle

"snakes that lie in wait"

"To chase raw deliverance and

Shun the safety of the paved way"

"Both cowardly and brave

To...

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Posted in The Dirt Road

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This is one of your

Posted on Sat, 25 Aug 2018

This is one of your alliteration masterpieces! Using the sounds and rhythm as a way to say the same thing as the words' meaning, it's so clever! I think this is one of my favourites of yours so far :0)

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Posted in Sharing

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Enjoyed this. Lots of great

Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018

Enjoyed this. Lots of great descriptions, particularly liked falling on the sofa in a dingy heap, and how his wet shoes sounded like squishing bugs.

Where you first mention students, do you need "the"?

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Posted in The Last Case of Dr. Jonah Wexley Abbott (Pt. 1)

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you have great skill making

Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018

you have great skill making lots of facts easy and enjoyable to read. I had no idea Norway had a potato famine.

I liked the way you mixed a wider history in with your family's history, too. And that you have been able to write something...

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Posted in The Shipping Line Clock

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Great rhythm you have cought

Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018

Great rhythm you have cought the music of the storm and made it into words

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Posted in Storm

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lots of good lines,  what a

Posted on Sat, 11 Aug 2018

the first bit - what a way to describe how someone sounds!

also very much liked :

"Tonight grows older

than I can handle"

 

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Posted in I AM HOMELESS

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gosh, the stress!

Posted on Mon, 23 Jul 2018

gosh, the stress!

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Posted in Saturday Part One.

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Happy Birthday for September

Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018

Happy Birthday for September :0)

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Posted in DISCOVERY

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Within 15 minutes of the Head

Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018

Within 15 minutes of the Head talking she on the verge of a full house.

should that be he's ? Marking a teacher :0)

I liked the Cheese Club nods. And the school without running water sounds like something Dickens...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 4

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this is beautiful all through

Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018

this is beautiful all through, no favourite bits, it's perfect

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Posted in DISCOVERY

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