210 of my comments have received 213 Great Feedback votes
I didn't know contactless was
Posted on Sat, 03 Nov 2018
I didn't know contactless was so risky! I don't like it because I forget my PIN number if don't use it each time. When I worked in a supermarket we had to check people's signatures carefully for every non cash transaction. Now if you lose a card...Read full comment
Posted in I Give Up!
this is lovely. If ever I got
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
this is lovely. If ever I got to choose where in the world I'd like to visit, it would be those maple trees when the leaves turn, I'd love to walk under them. Your poem makes a beautiful picture to help my imagining. I love "cradle of colour"...Read full comment
Posted in An Autumn of Leaves
one you need to read quite a
Posted on Sun, 21 Oct 2018
one you need to read quite a few times.
the other night there was a program about two asylum seekers from Ghana trying to get from America across the border into Canada, describing how in the snow they headed towards the lights of cars...Read full comment
Posted in From Roadside
Congratulations on 1000
Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018
Congratulations on 1000 pieces of writing, what an achievement! Reading your work has tought me a lot about using alliteration and rhythm, and your comments are the perfect example of how to give encouraging feedbackRead full comment
Posted in Junk Mail
PLEASE make this story of
Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018
PLEASE make this story of the month!
It's a wonderful read, thankyou so much for posting.
I'm so glad you have a cat friend :0) She is beautifulRead full comment
I'm not sure? It's the mark
Posted on Mon, 01 Oct 2018
I'm not sure? It's the mark of a good short story to reach a conclusion but leave the reader wanting to know what happens next :0)
However there's so much that could go deeper in your story, It's like you've shown one room perfectly, but...Read full comment
Posted in Winterkill (Part Two)
How I used to feel, painting,
Posted on Tue, 02 Oct 2018
How I used to feel, painting, there's this stream, or current, and the stream is the same for anyone who wants to make things, whether no one sees it or lots of people, it's the making that matters
I sympathise so much with the needing...Read full comment
Posted in 9 to 5