Di_Hard

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Spring a Butterfly

By Di_Hard on Sun, 23 Dec 2018

Dusty cocoon of box tight packed through warmer days deep green wire limbed larvi unbends into branches of frizzy plastic tree tall, when you both...

not ready to fly yet

By Di_Hard on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

cat on the bed looks up as I go in he lies on the floor curled as if fallen like a leaf still in school uniform the chrysalis of his face asleep next...

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clues

By Di_Hard on Sun, 21 Oct 2018

Pheonix feathers ruffle beneath the cherry trees on pavement by the letterbox and shed gold of a giant lion molten on the road's curve near the park'...

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mushroom movement

By Di_Hard on Fri, 05 Oct 2018

green grown gown gauzy grass grace solid soil lid down wonder on grains gain rain sense tense dense silent silt still eel slick icky cling linger...

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No sounds in this poem. It

Posted on Sat, 12 Dec 2020

No sounds in this poem. It seems very peaceful and airy and languid, like dying in ibis spell would be like slipping gently under warm water and finding you could breathe. I do like and admire how you create feeling in your poems, giving an idea...

Posted in Ibis

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Enjoyed this, evoke their

Posted on Thu, 10 Dec 2020

Enjoyed this, evoking their mystery and fierceness. Hollies seem to me like Amazons in their dark green armour, fighting on when all other trees have surrendered to Winter. You have made a beautiful way of illustrating strength for females :0)...

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Enjoyed this. Also

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2020

Enjoyed this. Also interesting about "here, here" being a comfort murmer, there, as it was "there, there" here :0)

Posted in Lawn Rolling Here

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" we are built of air and

Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2020

" we are built of air and

water and music."

This made me feel delicate and peaceful, like I was a better person. Thankyou for writing it. Will go and read it again :0)

ps Like imagining being in Narnia

Posted in Atoms of Hope

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enjoyed this very much! You

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2020

enjoyed this very much! You are writing so many wonderful things! Wind swollen with anxious breath is a brilliant line, and the end of the poem is full of light and calm, and gives such a feeling of SPACE

Posted in Images to Ponder

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roses are my favourite flower

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

roses are my favourite flower and you have caught them perfectly, Rhiannon, both wild "delicately decorating" and "richly exuberant" ones bred for gardens. I am sure the old variety ones which survive in my garden have personalities. I do love...

Posted in Wild Rose …

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This is BRILLIANT! I love

Posted on Sat, 05 Dec 2020

This is BRILLIANT! I love your walking and Nature poems, but this is amazing, too. Powerful, unforgettable poem

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Found this so comforting and

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

Found this so comforting and reassuring as these lines resonated strongly with me:

like waiting landscape

relentlessly endures,

that you come to the uplifting conclusion

take comfort and...

Posted in Waiting For The Thaw

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What a lovely poem! From the

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2020

What a lovely poem! From the first line about the end of the day belonging to cats all the way through to the last line which made me think that your memories from the photos were so bright they were like the moon and your going back to look,...

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I have read this several

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2020

I have read this several times, and keep changing my mind. The ending is hopeful, just now :0) It is good that your head is up for the sun to catch your face and give your mind the light to see that you can out grow the past