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Lethe

Forgetting things is so scary like standing on a bank a river is eating away at. My Dad died of dementia unable to talk. My son hates that I want to...
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It's all about bread

It is important to be able to look down on your enemy. Though they are not enemies rather bread and butter. That sort of spongy white pap I wouldn't...
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emperor's new clothes

Invisible fresh air is cut and sewn when whistles, chirps and warbles sweetly shear off from sky's roll of space, as silk ribon freed, catches light...
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Sol Monath (mud month in old english)

frost a cold kindness makes scars of passage reopened each day numb, unhealing. New sun brings back feeling warms clenched stone knuckles and knee...

Chutes of Spring

*/ Freshet chill blue ceiling full clouds uncoil loosedrops cold spool, pool till slow supple surface slope-called, slips dimples ripple, demure...
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Oh, this is AWEFUL!!! Because

Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020

Oh, this is AWEFUL!!! Because you have made Emmett and Abi so real, it's horrible to think of them like this, Abigail having to watch stuff. This bit at the end is AMAZING!!!

'I cain't take bein' this scared,' he said. 'I cain't take it...

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Please could you explain the

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020

Please could you explain the significance of listening to white noise between questions? How does Elizondo know about him having Rueda's phone?

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Posted in "Señor Bean" [Mr Martínez: Eleven]

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You ARE   a great poet

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020

 You ARE   a great poet, because you love words and it shows

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The feeling of togetherness

Posted on Sun, 16 Aug 2020

The feeling of togetherness is wonderful in your poem, very interesting to compare with the sort of poem people write at the beginning of a relationship.

I love the first stanza!  "Perseverance hand in hand" is brilliant :0) The image...

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My son asked me what the

Posted on Wed, 12 Aug 2020

My son asked me what the difference was between a vagabond and a nomad? I guess Martinez must look like a vagabond for the cafe owner to be like this. An ominous episode! I don't mind nothing big is happening? They come in small chunks, each one...

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Posted in "The Only Honest Answer" Mr Martínez Nine

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"weeping days of crushed rose

Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020

"weeping days of crushed rose petals" beautiful!

 

I hope you are feeling a bit better? Have just read your other poem, and understand better after reading this. No wonder Summer is difficult for you! And now all these...

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Posted in From A Window

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Hi Jenny. Hug from me too :0)

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

Hi Jenny. Hug from me too :0) Missing my Dad just now. Even when I knew there was nothing he could do about something, just his caring made it seem not so bad. But I am glad he is spared what's happening these days.

There is so much of...

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Posted in Needing Hugs

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I liked the message in your

Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020

I liked the message in your poem very much. It is a deep meaning :0) More deep than any description of sea monsters could be! Has made me happy

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Posted in Sea Monsters

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wow, didn't know that about

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

wow, didn't know that about positive and negatively charged flowers, either, is fascinating, thanks so much for all this extrapolating  (have never used that word before)

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Posted in Electric Bees

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Didn't know that about

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Didn't know that about cabbages! very interesting :0) Learn more from your wonderful poems than biology at school. You are an amassador for Nature!

There was an interesting program about smell the other day? Apparently people adapt better...

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Posted in Electric Bees

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